Yuki's Memoirs Evaluation (Charlie)
Evaluating Eillisha’s Storyboard
Wow! Immediately after looking at Eillisha’s first part to
her storyboard, I was very interested in her style of drawing and art work.
It’s a very classical, yet unique approach to a comic strip- like appetence, so
the unique factor of her work and her style really comes across as
professional, and I am very impressed. Even though it doesn’t have much colour,
her style makes up for it, but yet I think that her decision to not include
colour was very wise as I think it would of made things look a bit messy and
confusing. So overall, her art work and interpretation is very well executed,
and I would say it’s professional.
The storyboard itself follows a story that Eillisha created
a while back, so I already had a bit of background knowledge of what was going
on, which benefited me a little bit while reading her storyboard, as it’s a
very complex story with many different words which sound familiar, but I
already knew what was going on. The particular part of the story you chose to
include in your storyboard was very easy to grasp. It wasn’t a very hard plot
to understand, simple and an enjoyable read. However I did have some confusion
at first because some of the sentences didn’t link up correctly and sounded
wrong. But then I realised you had to read it Right>Left which is another
nice unique touch you decide to add, however for a few minutes I found myself a
bit confused until I realised it was designed in this specific way. But
overall, I love the design of the art work, the simplicity, the close up shots
you did of some of the wolves, your use of dialog in the storyboard helped me
interpret it a lot, so yes- another successful work you should be proud of!
Well done!
Feedback received by:
Charlie Cammack
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