Elemental Wolves Plot Notes
For two of my assignments we had to think about creating our
own story/ game (Story Development and Improving Productivity Using IT) so for
both of these I still used the story: Elemental Wolves but in Story Development
I had to write Faith's Backstory as a plot, whilst in Improving Productivity I
had to give a plot more about what the game is going to be like and why rather
than the story behind it. However after assessing both of these publications it
became quite clear I didn't give a lot of detail about the actual story of
Elemental Wolves which confused my evaluation partner and would the examiner.
So I created another publication and dug out Elemental
Wolves plot notes I made around 3-4 years ago, altering it and then re-writing
it. Also another problem was I had so many characters that played so many roles
I had to make another piece telling people about the characters and their roles
in the story. However this will be included after this publication as been
published which shouldn't be long.
NO STEALING AS THERE IS COPYRIGHT ON THIS!!!
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Beginning/ Prologue
Faith is running through the streets of Osaka giving a
slight monologue on her personal views of herself and world, it ends where she
comes against a bricked wall in the dead-end of an alleyway where the
mysterious pursuers trap her. The story
changes to where we meet Yuki after him waking up in a secluded temple (give
brief description of surroundings which are very Japanese orientated), he soon
goes to the Dojo to train where we meet Dreyer the ghost phoenix. A small conversation happens between the two
until Yuki asks her to train with him- results in a mini combat where Dreyzer
slaps Yuki and proclaims she’s going to get drunk due to having an addiction to
whisky and sake this will also lead to another monologue with Dreyzer talking
about how she died and how she met Yuki.
She comes back after Yuki has settled down to read a book
and passes out on her best friend, Yuki smiles softly and takes her back to the
temple in his room leaving the bird on his futon (Japanese bed) We then follow
the wolf outside where he sits on a solemn rock that overlooks Crystal Dynasty
and gazes at the stars where in his mind he watches Faith being chased through
Osaka.
At this point the protagonist is captured by three
characters that only play a slight role. These are:
~ Ichi
~Suso
~Diane
They take Faith to a Sekkusu house which is ran by two
aristocrats who is represented as young adults, dressed in Victorian style
clothing with a creative flair- a bit like Black Butler if a reference is
needed. When Faith enters the establishment with Suso holding her, he lets her
go in hope she will escape because Suso doesn’t like his job, yet he’s forced
to bring in ‘street kids’ because he was once one and in exchange for not
sleeping with random visitors he has to catch others for Madame and Lord Smith.
Seeing it isn’t a trick Faith runs down a couple of corridors and bumps into a
female who’s trying to escape also. The two have a spat and once again get
captured by Ichi and Diane who presents them to their bosses. Suso on the other
hand does get caught red handed despite Faith trying to cover his back and his
stripped off his job and returned to the normal status of ‘slave’. Later on
Faith is escorted to her room via Ichi and finds out the female she had a
squabble with, Lisa, is rather much like her and soon the two become good
friends.
The next day she’s dressed as a Lolita girl (normal uniform
for slave girls) along with Lisa and is set to work in a corridor cleaning.
Afterwards we go to Madame Smith welcoming a familiar customer who wants to use
their services. The manager’s response to this is to pick out any lower status
person that they like and to pay them the fee after they’ve used their goods.
Mr. Goodfellow agrees to this and finds out he’s attracted to the main
protagonist who in turn puts up a fight and refuses to back down to her
captor’s demands, as punishment she’s sent down to dungeons by Madame Smith
where Faith stumbles across 13 wolves. Before the cell door is locked Faith
steals a precious key in which she believes can be pawned for money if there
was a chance of escaping the Sekkusu house.
When entering the room, the wolves immediately recognise her
scent, revealing to her that they’ve been waiting a long time for her arrival,
however each wolf is chained to each other by
powerful steel shackles that can only be released using the key Faith
stole. Faith doesn’t believe in what
they’re saying so in exchange for escaping the Sekkusu house and freeing the
animals, she will follow them to where they need to go on the understanding
Faith will be returning to Japan. After a quick agreement with the Elemental
Wolves , they burst out the dungeon and make their way to the main floor of the
house. Outraged at the mistake made, Madame Smith and Lord Smith desperately
try to find the key before giving up and running away from their property which
goes up in flames. Meanwhile Faith releases all the slaves there and properly
thanks Suso who’s also trapped in a nearby isolation room.
The team take off across the streets and stumble upon an
abandoned park where a withering willow tree, begins to sprout new leaves. A
portal is then opened and the party are transferred into the realm of Crystal
Dynasty where they meet Yuki and Dreyer. Yuki welcomes them and privately explains
to Faith she’s the Element Seeker and what responsibilities lay ahead.
Build Up:
It turns out another Elemental Wolf who wasn’t present
during the escape at Sekkusu house, Cai, is a spy for the story’s main
antagonist Hiro. Cai herself leads mainly a guardian role throughout the
plot,along with her ‘side-kick’ friend Hei Lei whose another guardian and also
resembles a dragon used in war. Hei Lei and Cai find out about Faith’s arrival
and quickly reports back to their master with the news where we hear a slight
speech from Hiro. Again the focus goes back to Faith leaving a suspicion of
Hiro to the readers. Akki (Demonic Elemental Wolf) is teaching
Faith about befriending animals, this will then lead to Yuki announcing the
task of learning how to ride Yangxin, the last Bloodless Black Unicorn. Turns
out Yangxin doesn’t have the features of this equine breed and admits he’s an
abomination making him turn sour furthermore, creating an instant hate to
Faith. The girl struggles to keep hold of the horse but carries on trying.
Meanwhile we start to bring the characteristics of each wolf
and introducing them slightly. This starts off with Hiwatari (Water Element
Wolf) giving advice to Faith on riding Yangxin, Kaji (Fire Wolf) and Phantom
(Air Wolf) begin to taunt the elder and succeed in annoying him. Outraged at
not being left alone Hiwatari chases after the pair who hide behind Joey (Dark
Wolf) and Tomoshibi (Light Wolf) who are talking to Fell (Moon Wolf). A slight
fight happens between Hiwatari and Fell (because Fell is protecting Phantom)
and this gets sorted. Hiwatari then leaves to cool off near a nearby lake
nearly getting caught on fire by Kaji, the fire wolf feigns innocence and
before anything kicks off again Baowu (Mist Wolf) and Dreyzer step in breaking
things up.
Instantly the background changes to an oncoming storm where
Hei Lei, Cai, Hiro and Star ( a horse) appear. Yuki by now steps out of the
temple ready to defend the pack. Hiro demands they hand over the Element Seeker
and no evil will befall them. Deidatei (Sun Wolf) sends down a beam towards the
dragon which is blocked by Cai. From the temple’s veranda Sakura (Music Wolf)
growls at Cai who only stares. Hei Lei
suddenly sets the temple on fire as tries to barge past the wolves who free
Yangxin from his pen and the whole pack run off into hiding, leaving the
guardians and Hiro to return.
The Elemental pack stumble upon a cave where Epona (Physic
Wolf) and Aeron (Earth Wolf) go out hunting an return with not only food, but a
‘good’ guardian Kyuubi; the Rainforest Guardian. Kyuubi then leads the team
across the rainforest and desert towards another rainforest leaving them with
instructions to a temple known as Ryoanji. Miracle Falls is where the pack
rests to take a breather yet unbeknown to Yuki’s group, they’re closely being
watched by Jun, a green dragon who’s also resting amongst the bushes. Spear
another dragon appears beside him sending a full frontal attack on the
Elemental group after witnessing Yuki.
Without warning Spear aims for Kaji throwing him into the water,
Hiwatari rescues the younger from danger along with Akki, Phantom, Deidatei and
Tomoshibi who all begin to attack Seiteki (female dragon)
Leiko (Ice Wolf), Aeron and Joey face Yin (female dragon)
Hiwatari then leads Kaji and Phantom to shelter as they’re the youngest but is
blocked by Tsume (dragon). Yuki and Dreyer hold back Spear whilst Chi (Electric
Wolf), Fell and Sakura square off with Yang, leaving Epona and Baowu to deal
with Jun. Faith by then is attacked by a mysterious figure shrouded in an ebony
cloak on horseback, leaping into action her and Yangxin duel against the other
team using the element fire and of course Samurai Daisho* The mysterious figure
manages to knock Faith off her horse and pins her to the floor. Spear realises
who Faith is and orders the teams to stop fighting. The boy Itachi is ordered
to release Faith and after an agreement both sides make their way to Ryoanji.
For a few of the chapters things go ok, Faith and Yangxin
strengthen bonds and eventually Yangxin releases his secret of why he’s classed
as different. Itachi falls head over heels for Faith who also learns nearly the
elements except darkness.
The attention turns back to Hiro is already plotting a plan
to destroy the Element Seeker and co. After failing his requests Hei Lei and
Cai are punished for their actions and instead, Hiro sends out a loyal mare
Mids to kill Faith, then sends Cai to watch Mids. During the time when Yangxin
is showing Faith is old home near another waterfall they’re attacked by Mids
and Cai, luckily Sakura was trailing Faith and keeps her safe almost
sacrificing her life. During the fight Sakura reflects back on memories as
she’s slightly dying revealing Cai is her sister- Yuki saves both Sakura and
Faith leaving Cai alone with option of becoming good. Mids returns to Hiro
demanding she sees her foal, Star, who was taken away from her at birth. Hiro
complies with this and lets Star loose whose been brainwashed and corrupted
with power that he tries to kill his mother. Cai returns and after seeing the
scene between Star and Mids, she helps the mare seek refuge with Yangxin and
Itachi’s horse Jenkins, whilst she goes back to free Hei Lei from Hiro.
Crisis
At this point things really start to go wrong. Before a
fight that breaks out between Yuki and Spear over Yuki’s betrayal to the crown
and the massacre of Faith’s parent’s army, Yuki tells Hiwatari to explain to
Phantom he’s actually his older brother. Phantom doesn’t take kindly to this
and tries to run away from Hiwatari who physically replays a scene of when
their parents died during their childhood. During that night Spear attacks Yuki
on the mountaintop sending him crashing down into rapids of the waterfall where
we see Yuki’s past. Two wolves find Yuki washed up on the shore and take him
back to Ryoanji, where after he’s healed he tells the truth about what happened
during the Great War in Crystal Dynasty and is forced to leave the temple, by
Spear branded as a disgrace to the army of Hope.
Promptly Hiro finds out about Yuki’s disappearance and
declares war on the temple. Meanwhile Spear forces Faith to relive biased
memories that make out Yuki’s intention was to only kill Faith’s parents, yet
because the protagonist is loyal she doesn’t the believe the dragon and stripped
of her powers .
Before Resolution
After this Faith doesn’t believe she has the power to
correct things and Itachi starts sneaking her and some of the wolves out during
different periods of the day to relearn and master each element. Again Cai reappears and offers to help Faith
learn the Element of Darkness in return for seeing Sakura and apologizing for
her actions which goes to plan. Finally after mastering power Itachi takes
Faith out one night for break and admits his love for her, Faith being naïve doesn’t
believe in him at first but thanks him for his help. Spear finds out about
Itachi’s doing and imprisons him somewhere deep in the forest nearby. Faith and
her pack flees Ryoanji to the lost kingdom her parents lived in to meet the
survivors of Hope, after being confused by Itachi’s confession she goes back to
find him only to observe him being tortured by Spear. Itachi refuses to tell
Spear where Faith is hiding and is left to die alone. The protagonist goes to
aid the boy and tries to break his chains admitting her love for him. She tries
to break the chains that bind him but fails only succeeding in restoring his
health slightly and staying with him a whole night.
Hiro gathers his dark army and heads straight for the lost
kingdom, Cai and Hei Lei find Faith with Itachi and tell her she’s needed on
the battlefield. However the heroine doesn’t want to leave Itachi’s side so he
promises her he’ll be there to fight for her. She leaves riding back to kingdom
on Yangxin. Cai and Hei Lei quickly go in search of Yuki with Dreyzer’s help.
They find the wolf hidden in some catacombs and convince him to return saying
it wasn’t initially his fault about what happened- which it wasn’t as Yuki goes
to the battlefield, Spear returns to Itachi also willing to get to the war.
Surprised at not being dead he gives Itachi the choice to
join him and be free or basically watch Faith die. Itachi manages to break the
chains that hold him and escape Spear’s clutches arriving next to Faith in
dragon form, before the battle begins. Yuki also appears by Faith’s side. Happy
that the pack is once again complete the hero sends the army into war against
her uncle.
Resolved
Near the end of the war Itachi protects Faith from an
oncoming death dragon nearly sending him over the edge of a chasm. Faith being occupied at defeating her uncle
goes to her lover’s aid whilst Hiro chases after her, she shields Itachi from
death and is ready to welcome her own as her Uncle sends out a devastating
attack. Spear and Yuki out of nowhere intersect where Spear takes on the demon
force sending him over the chasm but getting greatly injured himself, whilst
Yuki deflects Hiro’s attack allowing Faith to kill him using her katana blade.
At the end Spear collapses from the curse of killing the demon and says a few
words of apology, his reasons for his actions and finally the hope they can all
live in piece before passing on.
The story ends with Star going to darkest part Crystal
Dynasty explaining to the Dark Lord Hiro has been destroyed, hopefully leading
to a sequel.
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