Plot For My Game Evaluation
Evaluating Eillisha’s Plot
Reading Eillisha’s plot was a very enjoyable process, it had
a great storyline which made it a fun read, really creative character names and
a very unique plot which I had never really seen used before which I give a lot
of praise for. Eillishas actual writing style is also very unique and elegant as
her varied used of vocabulary really gives the story a more interesting and
sophisticated tone which ultimately makes her writing sound a lot more
professional.
The plot itself started off reasonable simple to understand,
but as it progressed it got a lot more complex and at some points I found
myself reading a sentence 3 times just to make sure I understood it properly. I
think this is due to the fact that Ellisha has so many different character
names and roles and it is very easy to get confused with who is who and what
role they play- especially when a plot is so short.
Furthermore, We aren’t introduced into the main protagonists
name until the 3rd paragraph, when we are initially informed about
her in the very first, I got very confused at this point and had to re- read
all 3 paragraphs, incase I had missed something out.
Despite this, Eillisha has a very praise able and likeable
writing style which i think really shines out in her work, and the plot itself
is an enjoyable read, but I think you have too many characters in it at the
moment. I also really liked the idea of the added feature where you can battle
against other characters. This feature will make you game appeal to a more
varied audience, maximising profits so I think this feature is something you
should definitely develop and include as I would defiantly play these feature
because it sounds like it would appeal to me.
So in conclusion, a few more tweaks on the characters and
plot, your writing style is excellent and i would recommend further development
of the added features. Great job
Evaluated by Charlie Cammack
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